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Hey, you smart-making types know how to write, right?

 
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:17 am    Post subject: 1 Reply with quote

My sister says she'll buy me a PS3 if I get my GED in six weeks. I can't write essays though. Tips?
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:39 am    Post subject: 2 Reply with quote

Practice writing essays.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:08 am    Post subject: 3 Reply with quote

It helps to know what the examiners are looking for.

I had never heard of the GED, so I looked it up.

wikipedia wrote:
Language Arts: Writing
Part I

The "Language Arts: Writing" test portion is divided into two parts, of which the first covers sentence structure, organization, usage, and mechanics. Test-takers read text from business, informational, and instructional publications and then correct, revise, or improve the text according to Edited American English standards (or equivalent standards in Spanish and French versions). Test-takers have 75 minutes to complete the 50 items in Part I.

Part II
This part of the "Language Arts: Writing" test requires the student to write an essay on an assigned topic in 45 minutes. Persons who finish Part I early may apply the remaining time to their essays. A passing essay must have well focused main points, clear organization, and specific development of ideas, and demonstrate the writer's control of sentence structure, punctuation, grammar, word choice, and spelling. There is no minimum word count.[citation needed] The essay should be long enough to develop the topic adequately. Assigned topics are always an opinion or perspective that does not require special knowledge, such as the influence of violent music on teenagers or the advantages and disadvantages of living without children. Essays need not be true or based in reality as long as they are developed around the assigned topic.


To help formulate your ideas before pouring them onto the page, use a spider diagram. Draw large "circles" gouping points that belong together and each "circle" will form a paragraph. This way, your essay will follow a definite structure and will not "jump around". This will also give you an idea of how much time you should allot to each paragraph, since you can estimate how long it would take to portray each of your ideas. Also, the diagram itself might convince your examiner that your thoughts were well-formed even if you were unable to complete the essay in time.

In addition, the tips here seem pretty good to me.

Good luck!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:06 am    Post subject: 4 Reply with quote

Without reading the info in Jack_Ian's links, a brief outline could take the place of his spider diagram. For an assignment like this one where you get the subject and have less than an hour to write it, you'll have to keep it simple.

I Introduction
II Main idea 1
A Subpoint 1
B Subpoint 2
III Main idea 2
A Subpoint 1
B Subpoint 2
IV Conclusion

Add main ideas and subpoints as necessary (but given the time alotted, you'll be hard pressed to do too much more). Include a thesis statement in the introduction that clearly states Main idea 1, Main idea 2, etc., and a corresponding statement in the conclusion.

Put simply: Tell them what you're going to tell them, Tell them, then Tell them what you told them.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:11 am    Post subject: 5 Reply with quote

Also-- don't ever let your personal beliefs get in the way for a formulaic essay on standardized tests.

If the prompt was "burning coal is actually good for the environment" just agree with it and come up with two/three main points that agree with it. Nobody will ever connect you to the BS that goes on that page except through the passing score you get!

Side note: I got a crappy score on the writing portion of the GRE because I didn't like the prompt. Don't let that happen to you.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:21 am    Post subject: 6 Reply with quote

MatthewV wrote:
If the prompt was "burning coal is actually good for the environment" just agree with it and come up with two/three main points that agree with it.


But, um, gasification!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:36 am    Post subject: 7 Reply with quote

I work with students to prepare them for other tests with similar essay sections. Some thoughts:

1. I'm not too sure about the GED, but most prompts accept equally arguments for, and against, the position. The key is to pick a side and argue for it vigorously and convincingly.

2. The best way to improve essay writing is (almost always) to write essays. Write one every night, if you can find the time. The best way to improve your language skills generally is to read good books. One of my students attributed a 100 point boost on his SAT score to reading The Scarlet Letter.

3. Carefully work through examples of graded essays. Why did each essay get the grade it did? What level of vocabulary and grammar is associated with each? What is the level of complexity of thought involved in each?

4. Since you have a few weeks, it might be a good idea to review your grammar, particularly where it overlaps with "good writing". There are lots of websites for this.

5. Use the broad format that DPW describes, but don't be wedded to the specifics. All of the following are better than the standard 3-idea format, in the correct context: 2 well-developed main ideas, 1 strong idea and 3 illustrative examples, and 1 strong idea split into three pieces and 1 example. The introduction and conclusion are essential, but writing them after you've written the rest of the essay is probably best, since you won't really be sure your ideas until you've written them on the page.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:22 pm    Post subject: 8 Reply with quote

Go here: http://www.unm.edu/~tinan/writing/ged_essay_directions.htm

Set your timer to 45 minutes, then pick one of the topics and write about it.

Paste your result in a note here in this thread, and you'll get great feedback, I guarantee. I, at least, and I'm sure others here, will be happy to help you.

And congrats and good luck! (And good for your sister for motivating you. In the end, you'll be glad you did it, and not just for the new electronics.)
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:28 pm    Post subject: 9 Reply with quote

JDTAY wrote:
My sister says she'll buy me a PS3 if I get my GED in six weeks. I can't write essays though. Tips?


Think of the essay as the goal, not the PS3.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 3:46 pm    Post subject: 10 Reply with quote

Lepton* wrote:
…since you won't really be sure your ideas until you've written them on the page.
This is why I suggested a spider diagram. It really is worth the effort to start with this. You can knock one up in a minute or two, with the points you wish to cover and it easily saves you that time later on, since you can be sure that each point is covered in a systematic way, without the need to keep re-reading your work.
It doesn't have to be colour-coded or anything, just a quick & dirty shorthand scribble with a line drawn around points that you wish to group together to form paragraphs.
BTW It's also a useful tool if you need to speak on some subject at short notice. You can quickly lay out the relevant points and their relationships, allowing you to deliver a cogent and succinct presentation, apparently off-the-cuff, with just a scrap of paper in your hand.
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PostPosted: Thu May 20, 2010 3:44 pm    Post subject: 11 Reply with quote

JDTAY almost 12 weeks ago wrote:
My sister says she'll buy me a PS3 if I get my GED in six weeks. I can't write essays though. Tips?
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