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Legion
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:03 am Post subject: 1 |
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The Guardian prints a story in140 characters or fewer. i like this and Hemingway's 5 word story. Seemed a nice idea and I thought we could play a game where each poster submits a story, shorter by one character. I tried this on a different forum and it died on its arse.
Thought i'd try here, see how it goes
So,as a starter...
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| I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small voice spoke "Are you Mummy's friend?", "No" I say "Not any more". |
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Death Mage
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 2:45 am Post subject: 2 |
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Do paraphrases count?
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| The accumulated filth will foam up about their waists and all the whores look up and shout, "Save us!" I’ll look down, and whisper, "No." |
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Zag
Tired of his old title
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 3:07 am Post subject: 3 |
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I didn't count. I think I'm a bit longer.
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| Reds advance, smaller, but faster... so many. I lose a leg defending Queen, fight on. I collapse at Her feet, lose more legs, a mandible, and she is lost. |
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LordKinbote
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 5:38 am Post subject: 4 |
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| Death Mage wrote: |
Do paraphrases count?
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| The accumulated filth will foam up about their waists and all the whores look up and shout, "Save us!" I’ll look down, and whisper, "No." |
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I think he meant *original* content, though you get points for the particular source of your swipe. |
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Jack_Ian
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 2:33 pm Post subject: 5 |
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I will die today.
Executed for cowardice.
No final words.
The truth will die with me. |
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Legion*
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 6:45 pm Post subject: 6 |
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Just to be clear, and not arsey, i was expecting a story of 139 characters (i don't mean like 101 Dalamtians). Including spaces.
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Amb
Amb the Hitched.
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 6:52 pm Post subject: 7 |
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| You could start a rules game and make that the first rule? |
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DM*
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:27 pm Post subject: 8 |
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| When you said "one less", I thought you meant decrease the character count each time, so the stories got smaller and harder to write. |
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DM*
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:29 pm Post subject: 9 |
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| When you said "one less", I thought you meant decrease the character count each time, so the stories got smaller and harder to write. |
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MNOWAX
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 8:07 pm Post subject: 10 |
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When you said "one less", I thought you meant decrease the character count each time, so the stories got smaller and harder to writ. _________________ The Man The Myth The Legend
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Legion*
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 8:45 pm Post subject: 11 |
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| DM* wrote: |
| When you said "one less", I thought you meant decrease the character count each time, so the stories got smaller and harder to write. |
Erm... that is what i meant. |
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Death Mage
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:28 pm Post subject: 12 |
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Ok, becuase when I copied and pasted yours to do a character count, it came up 139. Hence why mine was 138.
And, seriously, my phone apparently sucks at posting once only. _________________ * These senseless ramblings brought to you by Insanity™. If you just can't figure the dang thing out, it must be Insanity™.
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Jack_Ian
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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:10 pm Post subject: 13 |
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OK! I'll get it rolling then…
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I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small voice spoke "Are you Mummy's friend?", "No" I say "Not any more". (139)
I will die today. Executed for cowardice. They may note my defiance and wonder, but in the end the truth will die with me. No final words. (138) |
Perhaps you might include the stories in the first post within CODE tags, as above. That way we can keep track of it and the mono-spaced font means that we need not count characters. |
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groza528
No Place Like Home
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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 4:22 pm Post subject: 14 |
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| I don't know about the rest of you, but with word wrap I have to zoom out a couple of times in order for the monospacing to help. |
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itisally
Master of Disguise
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 12:19 am Post subject: 15 |
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I call this one "First Time Parent"
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| I woke early, 2 am. He is crying again. We rock slowly. I long for sleep; they tell me this will pass. His eyes closed? Me too. Its 4 am. |
Should be 137 _________________ I could agree with you, but then we would both be wrong. |
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